I Saw You

I saw you 

Through the locked door, I saw you

Between the empty sheets, I saw you

Those cold lonely nights

You were with her and not me

You said she was nothing but,

I saw you!

You told me you loved me

And I said i love you to

Even though i saw you...

Reviews

[Relic]

~ It terrible to think that someone would do that to another person. I assume this happened to you being it's so well written. Nice job. ~

[John Elridge Medlin]

I really like how this poem ended. It felt open ended which I always enjoy. At the start the pace confused me some. Overall I thought it was well done. Keep up the good work!