Ominous

Swirls of clouds
Ivory overlapping ebony
Certain of a storm
Waiting for eternity

Black birds come sailing in
There is no blue sky
Clouds still hanging low
Seems like the world will die

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Sounds like a prophetic dream. Well written.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Star Wolf]

This sounds like the end of the world that many have been predicting and waiting for for centuries. I like this.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A really cool nature scene of the approaching storm. I can just imagine seeing the birds fleeing before its powerful onslaught. Great job.

[Tina Kline]

Fantastic indeed; "Often an omen, as animals react rather than humanity"
We need to listen more to them, as you have the skills....

E.L.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you.

So welcome :)

[Coyote Song]

Fantastic poem. It runs like a film in my mind. The black clouds rising up on the horizon, cold winds blow, rain falls and the birds flee before the encroaching storm. I sure enjoyed this poem!

[Black Cat Fever]

Very vivid. I get the chills just reading this and thinking of such a storm approaching. Splendid work here!

[Jetta Zippora]

Gorgeously dark poem, friend. I love the imagery and flow. Powerful.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!