Rust Colored Creek

In the rust colored creek
Arrives a flock of tiny brown birds
They gather together and splash
Within the clear sparkling waters

Author's Note

Something simple and I hope enjoyable.

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Nice. I like this. A real place, makes it even cooler!

[Wendy Seames Garner]

The next best thing to being there is to read you lovely poem, thank you!

[Tina Kline]

thank you. :)

[Star Wolf]

Awesome! I like this!

[Coyote Song]

Simple is good because simple can be the best to enjoy. I like this a lot, it describes a delightful scene played out in nature. I have a feeling this actually is a poem about something that you saw. Great work!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Shalini Dinesh]

This is like a photography of a beautiful scene. I could almost visualize it.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very much like a snapshot of words. A true to life scene. Very nice job on capturing such an image.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you for this divine view!

E.L.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks.

No, thank you ;) loved it! as here at my home a group of starlings each night seaks for a place to rest.... and they make the air black! then they land in a big green tree...