The Time Of Death

Darkness reigns supreme
And the shadows fall deep
Nothing moves or breathes
Across the moon death creeps

Night becomes complete
Only somber realities are real
Death takes rigid control
And nothing is left to feel

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

very creepy and nicely done.. great job

[Tina Kline]

Thanks Sean!

[Sean M. Addams]

your are welcome:)

[Rorenzu]

So this is what it feels like to be dead...

[Tina Kline]

Thank you.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very dark and sinister. This is fantastic!

[An owl on the moon]

A dark rhythm dances through your words... Each line becomes a deep stroke of night painted on the mindscape... Stunning for the season.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!!

[Coyote Song]

Very dark and deeply sinister. The shroud of death and the nothingness that it offers makes this deeply disturbing. A very powerful poem and one I enjoyed reading. The work is impressive and well crafted.

[Black Cat Fever]

Very eerie. Made the hair on my back stand all on end!!!

[Star Wolf]

Wow, this is very eerie and a tad bit creepy. Nice rhyming and over all dark poem. I enjoyed this really awesome poem!

[Craig2591]

A perfect poem for October!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks.