River Deep

lune haiku - 5/3/5 syllables.

river running deep
lingering
forest in sunlight



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Author's Note

Lune Haiku - The English Language Haiku.

Two versions:

1. 3/5/3 word count.
2. 5/3/5 syllables
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Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Beautiful! Love nature and this paints a lovely view!

[Tina Kline]

Just perfect! it captures a very good way to say, a season is changing...
I loved this little Haiku of yours.

Thank you

- Elisa

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Coyote Song]

Love this. It gives a very peaceful vision of the forest. A very strong image.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Jack Reaper]

sets a very peaceful image. i think youve mastered the lune haiku.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Leslie Philibert]

Great. Tina really understands how to write haikus, they are technically perfect and full of beauty, fine work.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Sheila Kline]

Excellent Haiku! You are so very good at these Tina!

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Star Wolf]

Awesome nature poem.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Nice and peaceful. I like it.