Feather Soft

Vision of summer.

feather soft
drifting on the hot summer air
hear a silent crackle
as the heat unfurls everywhere




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Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

very atmospheric, very visual, like the rhyme scheme, a fine short poem that works.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Horizon K.]

oh... hot! Makes me so glad it is only Spring... and makes me dread that hot hot summer heat!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Coyote Song]

A very beautiful poem of summer. There is a softness and peacefulness to your descriptions yet there is a crack of energy shooting through them too. The hotness
of summer. such a wonderful poem.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

You've created a very vivid image of summer. It makes me want summer to come much faster...except for the uncomfortable heat!!!

[Black Cat Fever]

This is, indeed, a very lovely vision of nature, both words and the photo. Superb job!