No Time For Anyone

Time speaks nothing to me
Somewhere in a thousand places
I have hunted, seeking centuries
But find only unknown faces

Lacking faith only creates weakness
Tragedy wears a shadowed smile
Never revealing, never showing
But traveling many lost miles

Never say never
For like birds dark and sinister
Your words will haunt you
Menacing, spiteful and sure

Years grow into decades
Age eats away viciously
Time is no one's friend
It destroys mind and body

Faces blur as decades rush by
Old age eats away at youth
Yes it will happen to you
Early death is the only truth

Nothing is there left to find
No one is left now to locate
I wander on cursed as I am
Not even to know my fate

Reviews

[BThomvanWart]

Wow, it's so mysterious and dark (in the best way!) I really like the structure and how it flows. It paints a lovely picture in my mind, as well. Good job, it's amazing. ^^

[Tina Kline]

Thank you.

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

wow!!!!!!! this is brilliant work, well done, you wrote this the best way possible..keep the good work up.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Chris]

Ashes and dust tell many tales...

[Tina Kline]

Thanks.

[Baby Ricochet]

Time is on no one's side

[Tina Kline]

Thanks.

[Dhaye]

Dark and deep... but it's true. We all don't know our own fate.

I like this. Nice job. :)

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[sparkle]

I liked everything about this poem , I really liked the way you wrote , great work !!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[larryb]

I like this a lot...its very dark but not in a scary kind of way..one of your best writes so far :)

[Tina Kline]

Thanks

[Cassie]

Truth that is kind of painful to digest. A good read this is.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Coyote Song]

I love the feel of this. Tragic and emotionally painful. Sometimes immortality isn't such a good thing, at least after a while. At least not for this immortal. Amazing poem!