Mysterious Woods

lune haiku 3/5/3 word count.

dark mysterious woods
shadows linger like dark phantoms
eerie voices calling




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Author's Note

The lune haiku - The English Language Haiku
2 kinds:
- 3/5/3 word count
- 5/3/5 syllables

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the woods always seem so mysterious...and there is always a foreboding before entering.

nicely done in few words.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!

[zainul]

I am frightened
ghosts of my childhood howl
feeling chilling goosebumps

Tina,yours is a wonderful piece.
Enjoyed a lot.
I have tried to follow your example.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!
I really like your poem here!!

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
I am glad to know that you like my poem here.:)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

it is true
greys linger in shadows of dark forests
but do not let them trick you

[Tina Kline]

I"ll avoid them as best as possible.
Thanks.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

physically to avoid them is easy...
but remember they are programmed to play with human emotion..
every time you regret after a fight with a friend or dear one and somehow it didnt feel "you'...know that u were temporarily possessed by a grey!Everyu time you do 'wrong' ...it cant be the anghel in you... Greys... gender-less entities created and genetically modified to be semi-visible and made to disintegrate and move through obstacles and fleet across time and dimensions... ingeniously designed by alien pre-historic races.

[Tina Kline]

They sound very bad. I don't see any good in them here like some people think. I wouldn't mind, however, having the ability to travel like that through time and space.

[Traci]

Nice job Tina. The woods can be very calming but certain spots are dark and eerie, just like you've written.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks.

[Black Cat Fever]

This gives me the chills. I like to take long walks in the woods and I've encounter
spots like you describe here. Good job!

[Horizon K.]

oohh... nice. It sends chills and works perfectly with the pic.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks...!

[Chris]

it fit the pic or the pic fit it...

So many moments
touch the darkness inside us,
...Zombies ARE ...alive.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Coyote Song]

I like this. Beautiful and shiver inducing.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice. Goes with the picture too.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

An amazing poem. Very dark and menacing yet painfully beautiful as well. You did an outstanding job on this poem.