Hurting...

Swiftly gushing pain
as if crimson
were exiting a wound

Scarlet and ebony
endless screaming
echoing a certain doom

Trying to play today
life will steal your breath
dark landscape cemetery

Dreaming a life without end
fantasy crime
there is no human eternity

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

I am in agreement, and like the sound bites of pain.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!

[Coyote Song]

Your words capture the essence of suffering pain. Very creative and skillfully done. I felt the pain here as I read your words.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks. Much appreciated.

[Craig2591]

Dark and hurting. You use words like a paint brush.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks. Much appreciated.

[Sami Khalil]

You have described the aspect of hurting marvelously...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Tina Kline]

Thanks. Much appreciated.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow this is different..."there is no human eternity" such a profound line...it is the "fanatsy crime"

life does steal our breath after love steals our heart's resolve..


really good piece...you have some fresh phrasing.

jacob

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!

[Leslie Philibert]

Tina is a poet I know well and like, and proves here again that she has talent...

[Tina Kline]

Thank you very much!