Ocean Meets The Sky

Splashing waves
green crystal waters sparkling
diamond made

Pounding surf roars
ever rushing forward
meeting damp sandy shores

Seagulls crying overhead
ever hungry
as if they've never fed

Powerful waves rising high
forever in motion
ocean meets the sky

        

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

Gorgeous imagery your choice of words captured in this write,
Full of enchanting, serenity. Wonderful rhyming scheme, and flow
That you incorporated in this write. Spectacular poem.

Thanks for sharing :)

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much!

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, Tina, this was an enjoyable read :)

[Craig2591]

Very nice. You captured the mood well.

One slight criticism... you captured sight and sound so well I would have liked to see smell and perhaps touch included. (You can leave out taste)

[Tina Kline]

Thank you.

[Black Cat Fever]

Enchanting................

[Tina Kline]

Thanks much!

[Black Cat Fever]

You're welcome indeed....

[Coyote Song]

A stunning description of the ocean. Full of enchantment. A strongly written and creative poem.