Changing...

Autumn poem.

The call of the geese
echoing from overhead

Rain dripping from the overcast sky
day and night and day again

The air is clear and fresh
appearing once more, mud puddles

The trees in anticipation quiver
and their leaves shift to red, orange and yellow

Reviews

[Susie Q]

Beautiful image of the transition into fall when the trees paint a lovely picture for everyone to see. Soon their shivers will bring a new picture. The geese wanting a warmer place to go until nature brings them back. Nice write,Tina.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you very much!!

[Sheila Kline]

Lovely! Oh, that rain does signal the quickly approaching colder winds of winter.........shivers, shivers!!
The image is beautiful and a nice companion for your words!!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!

[Coyote Song]

LOve this! The beauty of autumn shines through. It is a beautiful time of year. I wouldn't want to live anywhere where there was no autumn.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!!!!

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine poem about ( was it Keats ? ) mellow fruitfulness...the poet`s favourite season, great..

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!!!!

[Black Cat Fever]

A very beautiful autumn poem describing it perfectly.
Very creative and visual.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a nice snapshot of my favorite season...

"day and night and day again" made me hear judy collins singing in the background as i read...

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much!!!