Blood Red Sky

Lune haiku 3/5/3 word count.

blood red sky
I feel an encroaching danger
fear bleeds wide

Author's Note

Two kinds of lune haiku
1. 3/5/3 word count.
2. 5/3/5 syllables

Reviews

[Caradoc]

Very ominous. Combined with the picture, I get the sense that the dawn has become our enemy. It also reminds me of revelations, albeit, slightly in reverse. For in this poem, the sun is as red as blood, and so the moon would be black as sackcloth.

Intriguing, to say the least.

Well done.

-Caradoc

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Caradoc]

You're welcome. Have a good one. :)

[Black Cat Fever]

Nice. Red is danger and warning. Something ominous this way comes.

Excellent poem and I love your photo. Looks like a pic of the northern lights.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks much!

[Coyote Song]

Very ominous in short poem.
Excellent work.
One only wonder what the danger is. Different for everyone perhaps.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much!

[Craig2591]

I absolutely love the image with this. The words go well with it.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like this especially the last line.

nice metaphor within this senryu...

horizons can tell us something...there is augury in the dusk.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you much!