Shifting Pain

"That one night that never seems to end."

Crimson sky at night
aurora bleeding across reality
scarlet screams
a gaping wound
the night is long
tortured dreams
lingering smoke
winter approaches
long forgotten is spring

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Speaks well of the pain time presents to us. How do we keep living?
Somehow we do.
Excellent write.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks!!!!!

[Coyote Song]

The sky representing the pain the writer or speaker of the poem feels works brilliantly.
Much more creative than simply saying I am in pain.
Impressive work! Sometimes I do feel this way.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!

[Craig2591]

I never thought the sky could be painful, but your skill with words makes it seem that way. Well done.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks......

[Raymond Federle]

This is my kind of stuff! Very nice. :)

[Tina Kline]

Thank you much!