Fall Is Gone

leaves falling
embers fading
sky is grey
cold crackles
a single white flake
countless more follow
arrives winter
frozen and hollow

Reviews

[M]

Few words but great meaning,I love the using of words.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Poetic Beauty]

I think we have the same idea of winter. I am longing for warm sunshine and dirt beneath my fingers from planting flowers and my garden.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Stanley King]

Short and sweet, I like it! But, also it has so much feeling and truth..Bravo! I look forward to reading more of your work my friend!!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much!

[Black Cat Fever]

A poem that descries perfectly the slide into the icy cold of winter.
Impressive poem.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine poem that has for me a haiku/tanka feeling, well observed, well written..

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Coyote Song]

Ah yes, let the snow fly. Winter is beautiful in its cold way, life is suspended. Some returns, other life doesn't. Great poem about transitions.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like many of us feel sometime...we lose our sense of summer, of zest for life...and become cold with age or pain...and we become frozen, hollow...like leaves dried up and buried under many inches of snow.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!