Winter Forest

Through the wild forest
where the snow
                 forever falls
a landscape of white
shimmering and glistening
       in the blue moon's light
drifting across the snow
ghosts of days gone by
tragic eyes, voices raised
hear their tormented cries
the forest is haunted
             souls in eternal pain
     their graves refused them
they exist out of time
the snow continues to fall
it glistens with a timeless magic
                             ever dark
  ever pain
                             the ghosts roam
                  through the winter forest
                             existing forever
                                     in the past

Reviews

[...]

this remains me my childhood at winter time. we usualy go from the school throught forest. we had same feeling how you describe . all sounds became ghosts and we run like crazy. sometimes we scream. i really like cause this my expirience. you got very good rhytmus . i enjoyed thanks

[Tina Kline]

Thank you very much.

[Black Cat Fever]

This one made my hair stand on end. I like o walk the snow forests around my home. You just never know what is out there...ghosts...big foots, skin walkers, upright walking werewolves or some psychotic killer.
Impressive poem.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Black Cat Fever]

You're welcome!

[Coyote Song]

Very eerie and spooky. It made me shiver but I do love this!

[Tina Kline]

Thank you very much!

[Leigh]

Great imagery and feeling, I like this a lot for the immediate effect it had.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much,

[Leslie Philibert]

Tina is a poet who has a fine feel for the space and tempo you need in a poem,Like this a lot.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Craig2591]

A winter forest can certainly seem that way sometimes. Very descriptive poem.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ghosts in a snowy forest, white on white on white.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you.