Gone

Aloneness
Voices echo only in memory
Images fade
Time steals what I once had
Rain
It always falls
Inside and outside
Winter has arrived
Chilled to the core
Rain
Icy pellets
If only I didn't hurt so much
I see a unicorn
I weep
Time goes by
But there is no time for me
Rain
The storms go on and on
But at last I shed my final tear
And like the unicorn
I am gone

Reviews

[DrD]

There is that moment when we are overwhelmed with our despair and there is no one to turn to. I sensed that feeling again in this work and while it was not pleasant, it was admirable in that it stirred the ashes of the past and that's what poetry does. And you should know that you do it very well.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!

[Amduscia]

I can't find the right words to compliment this. Haha. Brilliant. Loved it.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you.

[Amduscia]

A pleasure, truly, and thank You for Your review of "Myrrh of Death". Greatly appreciated.

[Tina Kline]

You're very welcome.

[Coyote Song]

Nicely done poem, rich with dark and painful imagery.
The sadness runs deep in this.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much.

[Black Cat Fever]

So final at the end. Like the loss of the unicorn, something important here has been lost. A uniwue person. Fanatic impressive ob on this dark dark poem.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks BCF.

[Star Wolf]

Like the unicorn I am gone. Yes, something unique and special has faded way.
A very dark and powerful poem.
I enjoyed reading this a lot.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you.