Night And Day

Dawn was slow and steady
Bleeding across the grey sky
Red, yellow, and orange
Sweeping unfolding bird wings

Night fades away
Black wings folding inward
Eyes closing as the sun rises

The fire spread and spread
Songs rose to greet the new day
The leaves rustled in the morning breeze
Flowers opened their blooms skyward

But in the shadows the night waited
Turned in upon herself but alert
She would return and reign again once more

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

the mysterious night reigns in her awesome beauty, the picture and your words are a perfect blend...lovely write here.. Tina...

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much!

[Coyote Song]

A very beautiful nature poem. Love the way it unfolds and folds back up, almost like a living being.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Cool write, I enjoyed this a lot.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much.

[Star Wolf]

The wonder and beauty of nature unfolding forever before our eyes. So often we jut don't notice it anymore. Outstanding write.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks, my friend.

[Black Cat Fever]

A very beautiful nature poem, and just like nature it is full of natural mystery.
Impressive poem. I enjoyed this so much.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you BCF.

[Black Cat Fever]

Meow meow meow

[Ladysue]

I really enjoyed this. It has an element movement, of peace set in a time and place for everything..beautifully done..

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much.

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine poem in the tradition of the natural observation of Ted Hughes, finely spun, excellent poetry.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What an unique way to describe a sunrise. A excellent little piece of writing.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much!