The Passing Of Moons

Wandering in empty lands
Going no where - Way too fast
Trying to learn yet I don't understand
Future, present or even the past

Moons spin high over head
The sky is always inky black
My eyes follow where paths never lead
Where I've been I've lost track

Confusion please, its a cold plate to eat
I sicken and slowly waste away
My mind is tired and so are my feet
Anorexia, winds now blow me away

Too many moons have now gone by
Yet time seems to have somehow stood still
I'm too dried out even to cry
I'm alive despite my best efforts to self  kill

I wander and I marvel at the many moons
Where am I - I don't even know
But darkness has shed it's shroud of doom
and I gladly move where the winds blow

Reviews

[Raymond Federle]

Def a tune in there somewhere to match this! Excellent work. - GHOST

[Tina Kline]

Thank you much.

[Fran Marie]

a grim piece speaking of desolate winds.. darkness and gloom...stunningly dark poetry

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Black Cat Fever]

Fantastic tale in this poem of wandering and wondering. Enchanting landscapes and confusion of what will be. Love this!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much BCF.

[Black Cat Fever]

meow meow meow

[Star Wolf]

A really cool poem, vivid and sharp. i sense the darkness and pain in this.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Ladysue]

this is a very powerful piece of writing..very well put together and gives the desired effect..excellent writing..

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much!

[Damien Thibodeaux]

This is write is like a personal journey of lost dreams, depression and surrender. You do this so well. I've felt what you descibe so many times before. This is a poem that many can relate to on some level.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Craig2591]

Desolate, lonely and hopeless. I'm guessing that's what you were going for. You did well.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Amazing and mysterious. Good writing.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

It's a cool poem.

[Coyote Song]

This is so very eerie. Beautiful yet terrifying. It seems as if things hare happening quickly yet also taking a long time. Perhaps its taking place on some other world.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much.

[Coyote Song]

You are welcome.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such and eerily dramatic piece of poetry… this sounds much like the mind of someone who may suffer from depression.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome.