Vision

Really noticing nature.

Vision focus

until I see the coiling tendrils of mists
gliding over the valley

Canadian geese fly overhead in several V formations
their calls echoing earthward

Vision narrows
until I see the lake
placid waters blazing away
with the colors of the trees

Frost slowly creeps in
coating the world furry white
as fall chills spread wide

Vision fades
until all I can see
are fiery shades
seasons changing again
nature taking on colors autumn made

Reviews

[KAREN]

Beautiful imagery, and great flow! Each stanza is strong a carries a beautiful picture!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much.

[KAREN]

My pleasure!

[Coyote Song]

A really impressive autumn poem, describing how the viewer focused in on natural scene before them. I really enjoyed reading this and sharing the vision.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much.

[Coyote Song]

...smiles..:)

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine poem, to use again a quote I like from the Austrian playwright Peter Turrini, this is.....the poetic construction of reality...you write here about what you see and understand, and that makes good literature !

[Tina Kline]

Thank you so very much!

[Star Wolf]

I really like this. It highlights all the wonder and beauty of the season.
Awesome poem!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much.

[Star Wolf]

You're so welcome, my friend.

[Black Cat Fever]

A very unique and different sort of autumn poem. Grand imagery.
I love this!

[Tina Kline]

thanks BCF.

[Black Cat Fever]

...meow.....

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Extraordinary vision of coming fall! Outstanding and beautiful!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is beautiful. I love poetry on the seasons, and you penned this one with style!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks so much.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure!