Butterfly On Fire

There's a Butterfly
drifting across ebony skies
trailing wings of fire
over a place of dark and cold
over a place of funeral pyres

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

extraordinary beautiful yet dark poem. It does have a powerful impact.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks BCF.

[R J Askew]

Brilliant vision. fascinating how you take a symbol of gentleness and turn it into something different.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very visual and exotic. Outstanding work.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you!!!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

You are most very welcome.

[Craig2591]

This evokes a nice visual.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much!

[MomzillaNC]

A dark and elegant write. Left me wanting more…

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Star Wolf]

This is an awesome poem o such dark beauty. I can see this poem in real life.
Well done job!

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Star Wolf]

...aahhhoooooooooooooooooo....

[Coyote Song]

This is very beautiful, very dark and very chilling.
It made me shiver just to read it. Impressive poem.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.