No One Sleeps

The soft pitter patter of rain
As darkness slowly descends
A gentle grey sigh unfurls
Whispers of autumn's hold

A crow calls from somewhere
A loud voice cutting the silence
Wings unfold she flies away
The rain becomes thicker, harder

A cool fall chill on the air
Tendrils of damp coil and reach
Night falls across the rural town
Even so, no one sleeps, no one sleeps

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

A soothing storm poem. Love the imagery in this. Dark, lovely and beautiful.

[Tina Kline]

Thank you.

[Coyote Song]

A brilliantly well crafted poem. Beautiful jet a sense something dark and sinister in the air, and it's no autumn's chill. I enjoyed this one.

[Tina Kline]

thanks for all your reviews Coyote Song!!

[Star Wolf]

Awesome poem. Dark, sinister yet beautiful too.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks my friend.

[Star Wolf]

Welcome, my friend.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Darkly beautiful, very visual. Amazing write.

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much.

[Sean M. Addams]

awesome visuals in this.. it flows well overall . this is beautifully creepy

[Tina Kline]

Thanks a lot!