Ocean Sunset

The waves crash
against a fiery ocean sunset
the trees on the rocky shore
in the wind are twisted and bent

The flames unfurl wide
a salty breeze blows
the waves rise and fall
and the brilliant sunset glows

Reviews

[ivizarx]

lovely read, enjoyed it very much so.. would offer some constructive criticism but there's none needed, good transportation imagery, gives you a real scene of a campfire on a beach in Oregon possibly since it has trees along a rocky shore...

[Eric Cox]

Beautiful!

[Samuel Dickens]

Ah, those west coast sunsets. As you've described here, they are simply amazing.

[Star Wolf]

Awesome! This is truly beautiful!

[deeps]

This is beautiful, enjoyable read

[Jenny Nelson]

What a beautiful picture you've painted! Wish I were there. Well done!

[Black Cat Fever]

I love the fire in this, very colorful and powerful. Creates a breathtaking picture. I can't get enough of the ocean either!