Ocean Dreams

I walk upon the warm damp sand
I dive into the rising emerald wave
See me in the froth - See me in the foam
I sing Dolphin songs
Out into the ocean
I roam
I sail upon Albatross wings
I cry with the gulls
Yes - Even they sing
I am Sea Horse
I curl my tail around
Sea grass
I am fragile
Touch me
I break like glass
I bob upon the ocean surface
Sea Otter - Sea Lion
Eating sea food
I crack it with a stone
Then I unfurl my feathers
Leaving behind this wet land
I rise into the air currents
Lost - Alone
Star like - Ivory - I flash
Seagull silhouetted against
Angry black storm clouds
I cry once
I sparkle
Then I am gone
Not so certain
In this ocean world
Is where I belong

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Rather fun and playful. I love the vivid ocean imagery. Excellent pen on this one.

[A.Lee]

this is beautiful. I love the imagery and the detail. Great work.

[Sean M. Addams]

awesome piece ... the title fits this piece alot a very beautiful write ..lots of wonderful detail in this .... makes me miss the beach ... great stuff !!!

[Wicahpi]

I love the ocean; dolphin, sea horses, gulls, otters ...
All of Mother Natures gifts of the deep sea.
I liked your imagery very much.
Well written!!!

Kudos,
Wicahpi :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I was lucky and was station on both coastlines for 6 years. Your description took me back to good days when I roam the beaches and the great animals of the sea. I like the story and the ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Ladysue]

I love poems with the ocean...this was beautifully descriptive and a pleasure to read. It flowed wonderfully and I was right there with you...Good work....

[Black Cat Fever]

Ahhh, I can smell the sea salty brine scent of the ocean and feel the ocean breeze ruffling my hair. Love this!

[Jenny Nelson]

Such a sense of longing. A beautiful piece that has such great description of the physical and emotional.

[Sheila Kline]

Your write certainly causes me to pine for some fresh ocean breezes!
Fitting descriptions and vivid words make me reach to feel such a breeze on my face..........ah, such a lovely ocean dream!
Nice job!

[deeps]

This is truly amazing! I like this Tina it's lovely!