Dark Forest

A haiku.

in the dark forest
shifting and coiling black mist
the moon fades from sight

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Haunting and eerie. Very spooky pen on this.

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that's how it should be done..simply but evoking so much..well written indeed

[Sean M. Addams]

I like this alot short but has a eerie feel to it... overall nice job on this sometimes are shortest pieces say the most :)

[Black Cat Fever]

This has a strange and surreal feel to it. A real haunted forest. I love it!

[Star Wolf]

Creepy and eerie. Not sure I'd want to wander about in that forest. Its as if something sinister is approaching!

[Jenny Nelson]

A very eerie and sinster feel from such a few words. Well done!

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

That was perfect! I love haiku's and that was honestly the best one Ive ever read! It had such vivid imagery! great job! keep writing!