Countess Dracula

A poem in haiku form.

on top the black hill

there is a castle in view

bats dart around it

 

I know who lives there

I think I best not visit

I hear his wolves sing

 

the night darkens fast

I know I’ve lingered too long

he stands before me

 

“I am Dracula

feel free to call me the Count

it doesn’t matter”

 

his eyes are fearful

so is his white fanged smile

I am in trouble

 

“yes, I’m going to bite

yes, I really want your blood

you can be my bride”

 

it didn’t feel good

he drank down all of my blood

now I walk the night

 

I live up there now

in the castle with the bats

I’m a vampire

 

I hunt the night now

I am so hungry for blood

I am his Countess

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[quill of shadows]

great imagry i dont know how you giys pull off thees amazing haikus your verry talented and it defanetly shows in this write incredible job ,QoS

[Wicahpi]

This is fun for me to read!!
Enjoyed this Dracula haiku!!
Well done.

[Sean M. Addams]

wow!!! you make it look so easy... this was very well done love the detail in this alot... awesome job on the dracula haiku :)