Autumn Fire

in the weak sunlight
see all the leaves on fire
fall is sweeping in

Reviews

[Jeff]

I can tell from this that you certainly have a strong feeling about the coming of fall. But it seems to me that they don't exactly positive. It also could just be me as I do not typically read haikus. The description and imagery is fierce and the observation is very concise, overall a well-written piece. I just missed feeling you in it, if that makes any sense.

[Serenity Faith]

So much imagery in only a few words! Absolutely brilliant! ^_~

[Tina Kline]

Thanks very much!

[Eric Cox]

Love this view of fall, my favorite time of year.

[Marie Harrison]

What an blazing image you've painted for us all!

[Desert Dreamer]

I love haiku about the seasons...the blazing leaves and the weak sunlight, love these observations.

[Ebb and Flow]

I love haiku and I especially love haiku or any form of poetry about autumn. This is beautiful!!

Krystina

[Wicahpi]

Lovely!! I have that image as one of my saved
desktop wallpapers @ work.

[Black Cat Fever]

The colors of fall can seem like a fire spreading across the country side and some cities. Love this haiku!

[Star Wolf]

Awesome and beautiful. Love it!

[luciddreamer]

wonderful imagery....good job :)
Peace
Robin