Falling Rain

A Poem by Tina Kline

Lune haiku - 3-5-3 words

hear the rain
dropping from a dark sky
a gentle whisper

© 2011 Tina Kline

Author's Note

Lune haiku: the poem should resemble a crescent moon, which is the reason for the name Lune. Lune Haiku can be 5-3-5 syllables or 3-5-3 words and does not need to have a seasonal word, it can rhyme and use all other poetic devices.

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G. K. Bostic

Lovely Tina!

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Black Cat Fever

Nicely done, I love the rain, it is peaceful and relaxing when you're on the inside looking out and listening. I really like this.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Star Wolf

This is very peaceful and relaxing. I think I might try this lune haiku myself.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 2, 2010
Last Updated on July 5, 2011

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