Bitten

Bitten and surrendering

giving into ecstasy

blood trickles

blood flows

moans of passion

death hovers close

the Grim Reaper has the beautiful face

of a vampire

crimson kiss

dying breath

in the vampire’s embrace

life fades

with no trace

 

The moon rides high

blood red in the night sky

black wings unfurl

waiting for the dead to rise

up from the grave

blood thirsty

the black wings envelop

guiding into the dark

first blood hunt

a vampire is made

a vampire is born

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

A chilling story about becoming a vampire. Nice pen on this.

[Star Wolf]

Awesome poem/story on someone becoming a vampire.

[Sean M. Addams]

like the detail in this and thought you ndid a great job on the imagery too... overall a very impressive write ..

[Black Cat Fever]

Wow, what an erotic and painful experience being turned! Love it!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very god imagery, Excellent write!

[Marie Harrison]

Wow, this is a bone chilling vampire write. I felt as if I was there and apart of the scene. Great way of setting the scene and bringing the reader into the story so well. Outstanding.