Urban Sickness

lune haiku - 3/5/3 words

dark urban zone
here diseased souls do linger
my losing battle

Reviews

[Moflo]

Great! There is a large popularity with city life but a lot of people don't see the turmoil and depression underneath of feeling so insignificant. I tend to agree with Wordsworth's take on London and Joyce's on Dublin, that city life isn't always better. This was a good haiku!

[Black Cat Fever]

Dark and sinister, the under belly of cities. All sorts of sickness lurking there. Fantastic three lines lune haiku. A new form of haiku for me.

[Sam Severn]

WOW! This struck me like graffiti spray-painted on an urban wall! FANTASTIC, TINA! ㋡

[momo]

the real world urban style lol good job!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

The blight and the beauty of our urban zones. The love hate relationship we have with them. Darkly impressive reading.

[Star Wolf]

The city can feel like this sometimes. That's why we need to save wild places so we can go to them and breathe again.

[KAREN]

Good job! You captured alot of meaning in just a few words.

[Robin]

that is exactly how Cities make me feel ~