Flower In A Vase

lune haiku - 3/5/3 word count.

a single flower
droops in a cracked vase
one petal falls

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A great example of cause and effect.

[Black Cat Fever]

This is quite the sad vision. Time to toss the flower out. Nice little haiku.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This does paint a picture of a flower sitting in a vase too long. Not a pretty sight but a sad one.

[Star Wolf]

This is a cool poem and it describes why I don't care for cut flowers, they start wilting and dropping their petals, it's like watching something dying.

[Coyote Poetry]

Create a beautiful vision in so few words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Calypso]

I love keeping flowers from my garden in a vase in my room. This reminds me of the peace they give me