Near The Ocean

lune haiku - 3/5/3 word count

ghostly mists swirl
distant comes the ocean's roar
overhead seagulls cry

Reviews

[Calypso]

This reminds me of a time (here I go again) where I was at the beach. That was a hard time for me....

[Black Cat Fever]

I feel as if I'm walking along a sea cliff with the ocean roaring and pounding somewhere below....lovely!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A very beautiful word picture of the ocean...I can hear the sounds too!

[KAREN]

Great imagery! Three lines gives the readers a work of art.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So much vision in so few words.

[Star Wolf]

This is very beautiful. Awesome! I'm wishing I was there this very second!

[Poetic Beauty]

The first line is so vivid. I like this piece. It paints a clear picture with very few words.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You sent me on a mini vacation! Excellent beautiful write!

[Marie Harrison]

Oh I can see and hear it now!
Lovely and peaceful poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

No better place to be. I wish today to be with the ocean. In the end my ashes want to be tossed into the sea. A amazing poem.
Coyote