Seagulls

A Poem by Tina Kline

lune haiku - 3/5/3 word count.

seagulls circling overhead
winking stars against dark clouds
damp, salty air

© 2011 Tina Kline

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The Rock And Roll Cowbo..

Just hope they don't use you as target practice. I think of my younger days at Santa Cruz Beach Boardwalk.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Black Cat Fever

This brings on the feel of the beach. Very nice indeed!

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolf's Dark Song

The ocean on a stormy day. Exciting and scary both. I like this a lot! I like seagulls!

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Calypso

This reminds me of when I went to Jamestown, VA. I was on a ferry and there were seagulls flying around everywhere.
You're good at haiku. I've only wrote a few because it's so hard for me.

Posted 14 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Star Wolf

This has a very strong ocean feel to it. I like it!

Posted 14 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Marie Harrison

Winking stars against dark clouds

What a beautiful image
I can see the sea gulls circle and call
as I smell the damp, salty air

Posted 14 Years Ago

3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 11, 2011
Last Updated on August 11, 2011

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