Bubblegum pebbles.

lune haiku - 3/5/3 word count.

bubblegum pebbles scattered
tossed about with wild abandon
children's delighted laughter

Reviews

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

This holds a out spread in the center of it on human nature putting into the art of the world
but it is much more than that because it cancels out society
being from the purest, our children

every human is filled with love to hold, happy distraction, and a throw to the side
we leave behind pepples on the sidewalk that fall from our pockets when we smile
even if we are not children blatantly throwing them in delight
joy of new begining
dont you love kids

[Wandering Violet]

I like the font you used - it suits the simple theme and the children's delight.

Short and sweet. Well done!

[Black Cat Fever]

I like this. Very fun and carefree!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very cute. Makes me think of little girls having a really fun time. I enjoyed this.

[An owl on the moon]

Each line is filled with such a bold, beautiful freedom. A wondrous vision of a joyous world!

[Calypso]

This reminds me of something from my childhood, but I can put my finger on it. All I know was that I was happy.

[Star Wolf]

Very fun and delightful!

[Shalini Dinesh]

as children we all hold awesome package of memories, and this reminds one such thing....

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A great reminder of those carefree days. A wonderfully lighthearted poem.

[Marie Harrison]

Oh this is cute
I love it!
Reminds me of the
marbles I used to play with
Great colorful poem Tina