Storm

lune haiku - 5/3/5 syllables.

looming black storm clouds
cold rain falls
the sky grows darker

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is a stirring of the storm dancing through your words... the fearful sensation of darkness, and the devouring cold that coats the watcher. So well done.

[PyroKitty24]

Beautiful. I love the picture with it, it's a great picture. I love how you always seem to have a connection with nature when you write anything

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yeap, that says it all.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Strong words for a powerful storm brewing!

[KAREN]

Excellent work! Few words but yet the reader can see the storm unfold in their mind.

[Star Wolf]

I love a good storm in the Pacific Northwest! Awesome haiku!

[Black Cat Fever]

Very ominous and a cool view of nature going wild.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I can feel the electricity in the air as the storm approaches. I really like this lune haiku, its great.