Ocean Waves

roaring to the grey sandy shore
ocean waves, foamy and white capped
seagulls hang in the salty damp air
hear their strange and wild laugh

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Beautiful. The ocean is a great place to spend time. Nicely done with this.

[STAR CHILD]

this is so beautiful thank you

[Star Wolf]

(sigh) Beautiful, I can even hear the ocean's roar. I wish I was walking there right now. Love the Pacific Ocean.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A brilliant write. Your words paint just as powerful a picture of the ocean as the actual photo you posted with your poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the journey in your words to my favorite place. I could sit and watch the sea dance on the shore all day and night. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the place you took me to in this very well witten poem!

[KAREN]

Love it! I could hear the waves, taste the salt, and the seagulls I saw and heard.