Autumn Leaves

Autumn leaves falling, damp and heavy
Gathering and clinging to the wet pavement
A light frost appears in irregular patterns
So mysterious and beautiful to look upon
The leave's images are burned onto the cement
Lingering long after they are gone by decay
Damp autumn slowly turns into frozen winter
Snow will soon be falling from skies of gray

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Ah...I love the image of the leaves on the cement
and the dark grey clouds where snow will soon
be falling from. Makes me want a hot cup of tea.

[Audrey Howitt]

Beautiful write --wonderful sense of loss as we move from one season to another--

[Black Cat Fever]

A lovely view of autumn in the city.

[Star Wolf]

This is one beautiful vision of autumn.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This is beautiful. I love the image of autumn you've painted with your words, Outstanding writing!

[Robin]

imagining the scenes from my own autumnscape as the brief explosion of color slowly fades into the grey of winter