Ocean Treasures

A Poem by Tina Kline

lune haiku - 3/5/3 word count.

blue ocean waves
crashing upon the sandy shore
bringing hidden treasures

© 2012 Tina Kline

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Black Cat Fever

Seashells, crabs and floaters. I like this. It made me smile. Can't think of much more fun than wandering along the beach, listening to the waves roar and the seagulls cry.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An owl on the moon

I grew up near the Pacific Ocean and miss its wondrous treasures. Your beautiful form and flow speak volumes in these three lines...

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Star Wolf

A fun poem. I love this! Awesome job!

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolf's Dark Song

Perfect. This reflects one of the joys of going to the beach...hunting for what ever treasures the ocean washes up on shore!

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lina Grey

What a beautiful use of imagery in so few words. Thank you.

Posted 14 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on January 11, 2012
Last Updated on January 11, 2012

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