If She Smiles

If she smiles
         if you see her ivory fangs
know this
          the pleasure pain
she will grant you
          in the deep dark night
beneath a blue moon
          beside the burning fire light
as she drinks your blood
          as you die in her arms in ecstasy
know eternal is her love
          as she kisses you into Vampire
as she loves you into immortality
          as you share blood with her
changed - forever - is your reality

Reviews

[Star Wolf]

Awesome vampire poem. Dark and romantic. Cool.

[Lina Grey]

Dark, chilling, and seductive. Nice imagery, too. Well penned. Thank you.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very dark, chilling and highly erotic. Excellent poem.

[Black Cat Fever]

Seductive and deadly. An excellent vampire poem.

[butterfly]

cool