Unmended

You always come back

No matter how hard I try

You bring the pain

And I freely cry

There's nothing I can do

When the day ends

Night reigns fully true

But nothing ever mends

Reviews

[Kent Smotherman]

I really love the title and theme of this piece, and your words are chosen well. But I'd love to see this explored more! :)

[Aislinn]

Thank you. It was a short little thing that I had and wasn't sure if I wanted to keep going with it. So your feedback really helps.