Lips

One of my favorites so far.

Lips

brushing, joining, mashing

kissing.

Tongues

pushing, jostling, playing

laughing.

Hands

holding, squeezing, guiding

inviting.

Pink rosy cheeks

caressed by fingertips,

smiles emerge

with unified

lips.

Reviews

[Princy]

Damn this is one sensual masterpiece! o_o
Sexy!

[Rachelle]

That is just so fantastic. I miss my boyfriend...boohoo. I need a new one. I love it.
Good job, Titan
xxoo Kisses from me...

[Jeannie Wilder]

What I like best about your writing so far is that it's just fun to read. I was immediately pulled in by the centered alignment and small to large font and then back down again. Basically this captured the kissing excitement, haha very nice!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Each word with a purpose. Poem is fun too read. Flow of words moved perfect. The emotion and desire of love is strong in the words. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Frantzuu]

wow, sweet poem, very descriptive, i like it. :D

[Hollywood]

16 views & only one review. What a shame because this poem is also very well written, I like the small rhyme at the end. The short descreptive verbs cast a variety of images into the reader's head. Well done.

[wolfshrew]

you have a way with writing simply and sweetly minus the cheesy