Your words could carve a gold star on the blackest cloud!.. .. We all live, we all die.. simple truth. What smiles Life are the people who matter - this means those who care about humanity, even in a smile of a morning and a friendly nod good night, Kind gestures can alter someone's Life. Plus, it doesn't cost a penny. That said, I think that what you infer: what goes around, comes around.. then of course, comes; 'Do unto others as.. ' The daisy instead of an orchid from a child' . What brings smiles to a pair of eyes, or - grateful tears to their corners' Giving thought is giving awareness. Giving a touch on a cheek or shoulder can be a comfort. Either way, givers award those who feel nothing - a sense of warmth. Life and the living should be recognised.. somehow, anyhow. You sir, are nudging readers about the givers who need be given something in return - a thank you from heart and mind. Many thanks, sir. Sorry, too much, forgive.
Hi TOM
There are some kind, caring people in this world and there are some who will take advantage of you, no matter what...all of your stories are based on kindness to others, compassion to others, not the kind of person that will cheat you time and time again... by the way I liked all of your examples.... very well done Tom!!!
Warmly, B
How terribly well you tell this trilogy plus one tiny tale of a turn of events .. we call it karma where I come from .. enjoyed from one end to t'other Tom n truly tooly .. Neville
Posted 4 Months Ago
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4 Months Ago
Karma indeed Neville, you got it and thanks for your thoughts!
And what would we do without them? All they ask is for a decent wage to clean up the mess others make of themselves and sometimes, just sometimes life's roller-coaster can give an improbable hand to those deserving of it and at the very least make you believe in karma at least, if not a higher power.
Perhaps a lesson some of us could learn from. Of course not me as I am already prefect!
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Posted 6 Months Ago
4 Months Ago
Indeed my friend your review so perfectly sums up the ethos of my poem, thank you Lorry!