Wondering (a Nonet)

My first attempt at a Nonet. Thought it would be fun to play with.

The sun rose once again this morning

And once again you were not there

Ripped out of my vivid dream

Reality's not fair

Now I lay alone

In my cold bed

Wondering

Where you

Are

Reviews

[I Am THE LADY POET]

Beautiful piece

[Lillian]

takes my breath away. My heart is actually renching with the sorrow. WELL DONE! haha

[deadlife]

liked the elegance...wondering.....wonderful.

[Blackbirdsong]

Torey, a Nonet? And these aren't as easy to write as they seem! You amaze me with your versatility. You've really done a great job of expressing yourself here and it comes off feeling conversational. The flow is great and it isn't stilted at all as some Nonet's are. I can see having this laptop was something you really needed. Bravo!