Worth It

I remember the rain pouring

Your smile,

Your laugh,

Your hands at my hips 

Pulling me in..

Gripping me..

Claiming me..

Loving me,

Not common for me..

Your smile lingers against mine,

Ripping the breath from me,

The feeling of a light weight,

Ready,

Eager,

Worth it.

Author's Note

Little different from my normal writings..

Reviews

[MFrano1]

This is good. It shows the excitement of love in a way that is fitting... The lines are short, like the person's mind can't form a coherent thought when thinking about their lover, and while I was reading it, it seemed almost airy... Like the person was breathless. It was very accurately written.

[Caladoscope]

I really like this! I am new here at WritersCafe. I happened across your poem and it truly sent me. Gave me a smile that I needed tonite. Thank you and well done!

[Nini]

Wonderful piece! Love the carefree description of love

[Jamestown]

Great write!
Calming, peaceful and sweet:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Matching Socks]

Love really is the ultimate high. :)

[AaronFreitas]

I like it :) Nothing like kissing in the rain! Good work Tori

[....................]

Such is passionate love. A sensual write that reminds one of how light we feel when we are in love.

[Ace]

Strange, but amazing feeling when you find it.

[....................]

yes, it is :)