My Shadow

My Shadow

A Poem by ToriSchrodi

Forever my shadow shall fall over you.

No harm shall befall you.

For my shadow falls over you.

No one shall hurt you.

For my shadow falls over you.

I swear to protect you.

Even if you do not wish for my protection.

For my shadow falls over you.

For no matter what you say.

Where you go.

What you do.

My shadow shall fall over you.

And all shall fear me.

Because if they harm you,

I will know.

I will always will be watching.

For my shadow falls over you.

This,

I swear to you.

© 2016 ToriSchrodi


Author's Note

ToriSchrodi
Please ignore grammar problems

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Hopeful and beautiful words for love and concern.
"I will always will be watching.
For my shadow falls over you.
This,
I swear to you. "
I liked the closing lines above. Thank you Tori for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


A bit to much repeating but your meaning comes through clearly. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is nice! Don't we all crave for someone to be there for us like a shadow.. Protecting us.. Bringing us to safety... I liked reading this ☺

Posted 9 Years Ago


This poem said so much. I want a shadow to protect me now! :) Loved it! Keep up the great work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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ToriSchrodi
ToriSchrodi

Dayton, OH



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I am a amateur writer, and I hope to become a published writer before the end of my senior year. I dabble in poetry but I mostly write short stories and novels. more..