Chocolate Robots

Friend and I are giving each other hard topics to make poems out of. Care to read or join us?

Chocolate,

beautiful chocolate robots.

You fill my mind with wonder as your glass eyes make your way into my mouth.

So delicious.

You are treading on a single string.

About to enter my mouth.

About to be added to my stomach.

Are you scared?

Your glass eyes show no emotion yet,

I can feel your delightful chocolate turn sour as I bite into you.

Does it hurt?

Do you feel pain chocolate robot?

You do taste amazing.

How I wish I could eat your brothers and sisters.

For you to be united in my stomach.

To be brought together by the same frightful death.

Are you scared chocolate robot?

You should be.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think! (This is an experimental poetic game for my friend and I, care to join?)

Reviews

[Ice]

I want chocolate robots....

[Antoñyo]

Interesting....very interesting wordplay and creativity makes for adorable reading. This is also excellent exercise for those with writer's block.

thanks for the share

[Bri]

Thank you for the review :)

[Frieda P]

Ha I've never had a chocolate robot, very cute and made me smile.

[Bri]

Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Was my pleasure.

[Scott Metro]

This is wonderfully warm and cute...such a neat subject...and your delicate consumption..a delight.
Very clever...I smiled..
Kudos...

Scott

[Bri]

Thank you, it was a poetic exercise between my colleague and I. Thanks for reviewing :)

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott.....

[Lydia Shutter]

I like the personification of the robot and the fact you think you can "reunite" him with his family in your stomach. A cute concept. Lydi**

[Bri]

Thank you for your review. It was a game my colleague and I were playing, a bit of a poetic exercise.

[SheriH]

Omg I love it!!!!! Scary yet nice love it!!