Gone.

Poetic exercise between a colleague and I.

All of it is still here.

Our playing cards.

Your socks.

Our bikes that we used to ride together.

They're still here.

Gathering dust.

It hurts to think of what we used to be.

What we used to do.

What we used to say.

I miss how you talk.

How you laugh.

How you wear your hair.

How you kissed me.

I miss it all.

Everything is still here,

except you.

I'm here gathering dust with our memories.

With our jokes.

With our love.

Your smile rusting in my heart.

Your laugh burning in my soul.

Your beautiful personality.

It's gone.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think!

Reviews

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memories can hold us very strongly at the past. your imagination describe very well. when somebody leave us. how we still try keep person but is already gone. everthing is there but this mail character is missing. thank you very much . it s very intense it s bring me back some mine memories. thank you

[Rida Sarwar]

I speculate it as a great piece of poetry with awesome rythm ;)

[Frieda P]

'Gathering dust with our memories', great line...also the 'smile rusting in my heart', yep that's what it feels like! You pen'd it aptly...

[Sami Khalil]

"I'm here gathering dust with our memories.

With our jokes.

With our love.




Your smile rusting in my heart.

Your laugh burning in my soul. "

Those lines pack alot of heart and soul...Bravo on a wonderful write...:)..........

[Bri]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............

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Wow yet another heart felt pouring in the wind, After reading a second one you have to be going through one my moments. There really nothing easy to bare. But its good to get it all out:) Great job my dear friend:)

[Bri]

Thanks, I appreciate your review!

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It was my pleasure your awesome:)

[SheriH]

Beautiful!!! Brilliant I love it