She Leaves.

She Leaves.

A Poem by Bri
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A look into the life of having to share your best friend with enemies of a different species.

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She graces me with a hug.

A beautiful smile on her face.

She's amazing.


Her personality is like a brilliant sun.

Shining brightly without difficulty.

Bringing a smile to your face after a rainy day.


She fills my heart with happiness as we speak of our jokes and playful banter.

She's my best friend.


She sticks to me like a wonderful glue.

A bond that is strong and almost unbreakable.


Then the other ones come along.

Their presence hangs in the air like a disgusting stench.

Making me wish to vomit and banish them but, alas.


My best friend wants them here, so

they stay.

And I do not complain,

so as to not disrupt my dear friendship.


Then, like a sudden flood upon small houses,

they take her.

And I don't see my dear best friend.


Please come back,

how I do miss you.

© 2014 Bri


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Bri
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I think this is pretty darn neat...unusual subject.
Didn't expect the ending..
Very good job.....!!!!!

Scott

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bri

12 Years Ago

Thanks, I felt like writing this in the light of my day.
Scott Metro

12 Years Ago

:)
Scott...

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I try to go through all of my read requests once a week, so, please be patient with me!!! I'm an artist of all sorts. I've been writing stories since I could first hold a pe.. more..