Forest

A heart is like a forest
From the outside
A mystery
From the inside
A sanctuary
Trees that rustle
against the frosty wind
Like a heart beat
Caressing the loved ones from within 
A sunset of magic
More great than any prosperity 
As a glow in the dark
Of true loves first kiss
A wild fire
Burning down to trees of green
Like a broken heart
Filling with a ash of a shattered past
A heart is nothing more than an ever changing forest

Author's Note

If any grammar or spelling errors, please let me know. Grammar and spelling are not my strong points!

Reviews

[Spyda]

Cool comparison, I enjoyed it!

[Stephanie McDaniel]

Thanks!

[Trigorin]

Not bad. You use some good imagery in this and while I think the ending is maybe a little too narrow, you've done some nice things in this and it's a good start. Good work.

[Stephanie McDaniel]

Thanks, I'll see what I can do