For the Missing Piece of my Aching Heart

For the Missing Piece of my Aching Heart:

In some distant dimension She is waiting,

perhaps at this very moment we are happy,

sinking into each other’s embrace &

lingering in love, dismissing this lonelier time and place;

the present is then and the past is now,

everyone who came before was just a way

of killing time,

until You

met I.

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

In a short verse, you captured that emotion. Beautiful piece, well written.

[Kait]

Thanks Rita! I changed the ending so it had more of a flow to it by saying:
"everyone who came before was just a way of killing time,
until You
met I."
This revision may not be grammatically correct but it makes it sound better, don't you think?

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes - I do like that flow better - more dramatic! Nice!

[Androglossia]

Of loyalty and love. Inflicting sweet misery in one's self in the name of love. Very emotional write expressed in brevity.