Short Poem

A Poem by Tree Bark

by "short poem" i mean really short poem :P i know it is only 4 lines but uh i sorta rushed :(

Wear a mask that grins and lies,

it hides our cheeks and shades our eyes.

The debt we pay to human guile,

with torn and broken hearts, we smile.

© 2011 Tree Bark

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Grace Catherine C.

Grace Catherine C.

I really like it, lenght doesn't matter in a poem, simply the message and this is lovely.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Interesting. Good flow and rhyme scheme.

Posted 14 Years Ago

;) Wow, love it. Wonderfull use of words :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Thank you for the reading it differently than others! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Perhaps at one time, we have all experienced this feeling. This may be short, but it is full of insight.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on October 1, 2011
Last Updated on October 1, 2011

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Tree Bark

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HI! my name is ________ and i lub nature and the creatures in them in :D. send me message if you want or if you know the answer to any of my riddles (which you can see under my name), but don't commen.. more..